Please proof my '58 Campy custom

I'm finishing up a 1958-style Roy Campanella custom card. If you'd check it over for corrections, suggestions, etc., before I print it, I'd appreciate yuour input.
You can read the backstory currently up on my blog via the link below.

You can read the backstory currently up on my blog via the link below.

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Is that picture from the Topps Vault? I remember seeing a very similar image in Baltimore two years ago.
My small collection
Want List:
'61 Topps Roy Campanella in PSA 5-7
Cardinal T206 cards
Adam Wainwright GU Jersey
One difference I came up with:
According to MLB.COM, his total Lifetime PO # is 6,520 ... not 6,529.
Doug
Liquidating my collection for the 3rd and final time. Time for others to enjoy what I have enjoyed over the last several decades. Money could be put to better use.
My small collection
Want List:
'61 Topps Roy Campanella in PSA 5-7
Cardinal T206 cards
Adam Wainwright GU Jersey
Bowman Baseball -1948-1955
Fleer Baseball-1923, 1959-2007
Al
Always looking for Topps Salesman Samples, pre '51 unopened packs, E90-2, E91a, N690 Kalamazoo Bats, and T204 Square Frame Ramly's