Never liked DiMaggio or '68 Topps, yet . . .

My latest custom card . . .
There's a bit of backstory on my blog (linked below) today or tomorrow.
There's a bit of backstory on my blog (linked below) today or tomorrow.

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1. Line 10 - NY Yankees "FOR" s/b NY Yankees "IN"
2. 5th line from bottom - consecutive games), - I believe the comma should be eliminated
3. 4th line from bottom - I believe there should be a "period" after ".325"
You know how I love the cards that you make .... however, for some reason, I don't think this one lives up to the others you have done. Not sure why.
Doug
Liquidating my collection for the 3rd and final time. Time for others to enjoy what I have enjoyed over the last several decades. Money could be put to better use.
What is card #599 from that set?
~WalterSobchak
Card #599 is Bill Skowron, Angels.
ON ITS WAY TO NEWPORT BEACH, CA 92658
~WalterSobchak
BTW, there should also be a comma after "With the Yankees from 1936-1951" ten lines from the bottom.
Nice job!
Collecting 1970s Topps baseball wax, rack and cello packs, as well as PCGS graded Half Cents, Large Cents, Two Cent pieces and Three Cent Silver pieces.
<< <i>I knew he was good but never realized he was traded for the year 1936 >>
I see what Bob is saying with his explanation but I agree something more descriptive would read more clearly. ...traded to the Yankees for the beginning of the 1936 season?
Grammar popo unite!
Nice card.
I do appreciate the punctuation advice, as well.
Always looking for Topps Salesman Samples, pre '51 unopened packs, E90-2, E91a, N690 Kalamazoo Bats, and T204 Square Frame Ramly's
IMF
I thought it was a new NASCAR race.
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