Please proof my '60 Colavito & Killebrew

Over the weekend I finished the beta version of my 1960 Topps-style multi-player feature card of Rocky Colavito and Harmon Killebrew.
While I appreciate all the title suggestions, most seemed too "modern" for a 1960 Topps card. I decided to run with a take-off on the Ashburn-Mays card from 1959.
If you spot anything I should rethink, or that needs correction, please point it out.
While I appreciate all the title suggestions, most seemed too "modern" for a 1960 Topps card. I decided to run with a take-off on the Ashburn-Mays card from 1959.
If you spot anything I should rethink, or that needs correction, please point it out.

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Doug
Liquidating my collection for the 3rd and final time. Time for others to enjoy what I have enjoyed over the last several decades. Money could be put to better use.
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Great job
Shawn
Josh Wilker - Cardboard Gods
Joe
At first I thought it was a real card. I think I got it confused with the Colavito - Francona Power Plus card from the same set.
As for proofing, I think the sentence where Rocky appears in 2nd AS game and homers in the game is redundant (using "game" twice so close). Maybe fit into a single thought:
Rocky also appeared in 1959's second AS game, homering for the AL squad.
Bosox1976