I have poetic brilliance...;)

Derrick

MAINMAN was dissin' on yankyak5 with this poem...

There was once a man named YanYak5,
all he did was tell dumb lies.
He thought he was cool,
but he's really a fool.
He thought he was funny,
but he's just a plain dummy.
He thinks he is smart,
but he's really a tart.
He post dumb stuff,
thinking he's Tuff.
YanYak5 what a dumb guy.
He doesn't know the Yankees Rule,
all he knows now is he's just a dumb fool!

MM


So, I took that into account and made a brilliant display of a friendly "reply"... Here's my reply:

MAINMAN's poem was lame,
He definitely has no game,
he should be very ashamed,
but instead, I bring you a poet's fame.
Drastically inclinded to put your poem in hackles,
once your done reading, I'll have you tied up in shackles,
Like a wall coming at you, something you can't tackle,
Keep on reading while your jaw continues to drop,
sinking down like the Titanic, your poem has now flopped...
Take it back, time to edit, take it away!
Watch the poetic God justify what I have to say,
You've just been outdone today...
Just listen up closely, I have this all sealed,
Even your icon is gettin' sleepy over your poem...
and that's GARFIELD!

(He has a Garfield icon...that explains the ending...)

I'm the poetic God. Give it up!

yanyak5

only cause you learned from me come on, admitt it........

Derrick

Yeah..riiiiiiight. Don't make me get down on you now...you don't wanna battle me sucka... You better be lucky I took up for your a$$...

yanyak5

ok....I'll let you take the fame and glory on this topic.....but the next ones mine.... deal?

Derrick

I...um...I guess.