Off the topic....need help....let me know what you think.......

yanyak5

lmk what you all think of this poem that my friend wrote:



Cries

OH GOD, I HATE YOU
YOU LIE, YOU LIE
YOU DO NOT LOVE ME
TO YOU I'M A SIGH

LEAVE ME O' GOD
YOU MAKE ME SICK
YOU NEVER ONCE LOVED ME
WHY WAS IT HER YOU PICKED?


MY CHILD, MY SON
MY LOVE IS THE SAME
IS THE SAME IT WAS
WHEN I GAVE YOU YOUR NAME

BE MAD AT ME,
BUT I HEAR YOUR CRIES
JUST COME BACK TO ME
TO RECIEVE THE PRIZE

OH GOD, IT HURTS
IM SORRY I FAILED
FORGIVE ME O LORD
ITS YOU THAT WAS NAILED

YOU FOUND ME A HOME
YOU GAVE ME A LIFE
TO YOU I SHOULD OWE
MY PRASIE AND MY WIFE.




he needs some folks opinions on this so i told him i would help him out.....just leave a post on what you think.....

Lantz

Is that ONE poem? Or a bunch of small ones? Changes direction quite a bit,not sure if he's talking about god,his son,his wife,or his relationship with god?

Well,I guess it's good if you're a little confused. I think that's what poetry is about. It leaves us each to interpurate it our own way.

Lantz

yanyak5

i think its a coversation between him and God because his wife died and he's saying how he hates God because God took his wife away