Your thoughts on this ad for Facebook.... upcoming coin show..... your comments appreciated
ScarsdaleCoin
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what do you think? 
Jon Lerner - Scarsdale Coin - www.CoinHelp.com
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Interesting 4 hour coin show!
I like the free admission aspect.
yes, everyone loves this new format.... its a very small upscale and boutique show.... we rotate different dealers each time and yes its true Dealers are required to wear Jackets.... no mustard stained tee shirts
I like the colors of the ad. If it were me, I would place the street address of Sheraton Tarrytown on the ad. Whenever I leave the address off my ads, people always ask for it.
Not sure if this is the feedback you are looking for:
Bottom 2 lines are too hard to read. Move the url to the lower left corner and see if it works being flat across the bottom. "Visit our website for more info" and the arrow should be deleted (it is implied and less is more in advertising).
I would not use all caps either. Maybe for "COIN SHOW" and "FREE ADMISSION"
QR code with more information / address